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Daisy Hunt

Breakfast
Breakfast by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

From chapter eight of God Help the Outcasts, a rare moment of peace and quiet. I forgot it was supposed to be a skillet instead of a kettle. And the back of the stone isn't straight. Otherwise, I like how this turned out.

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Posted: Sunday, 30 November, 2008 @ 11:27 PM

We can always pretend they forgot it was supposed to be a skillet, too. XD

...I've been watching too much Food Network lately...I keep wanting to warn Sephiroth to back away from the stove, feathers are flammable! And none of them have taken the precaution of tying their hair back, tsk.

Again, I like the expressions here...everyone looks relaxed. Well, Zack looks more chipper than relaxed, but that seems to be in keeping with his character, so. XD And I think his hair is my favorite thing about this picture...it looks so...lively. XD I want to poke it.

Cloud's pose looks a little bit off...it might just be that the legs on the chair look sort of over-long.

I really like the window in the background...in particular the fact that you can see an empty road. Maybe it's just me, but I've always found empty roads (and snowed-over roads) sort of relaxing in their own right...like nobody's going to suddenly show up and bother you.

Posted: Monday, 01 December, 2008 @ 04:10 AM

LOL. That works!

Zack's hair really came out well. X3 Cloud was definitely giving me some problems, so I'm not surprised his pose doesn't quite work. XD;

nodnod. And a nice quiet breakfast with nobody barging in is definitely what they need!

headdesk. I just realized I say "stone" instead of "stove" in my description.... must fix that.

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