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Daisy Hunt

Sephiroth, William, and Merlin
Sephiroth, William, and Merlin by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

I like to say that if you're having trouble telling them apart, Seph is the one who doesn't look innocent. XD;

This pic has been giving me trouble for some time. The wings again, especially William's (the clone's). You can see where I was having trouble with the lower left even after I'd inked it. Otherwise, I like this. ^^ It's from chapter 6 of God Help the Outcasts.

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Posted: Tuesday, 02 December, 2008 @ 10:14 PM

I really like the lower wings on this one...all the wings are nice, but on the lower wings, the stretch of solid color brings out the detail in the individual feathers.

I like the contrasting attitudes presented by the two Sephiroth-shaped beings, particularly the hand-placement. The eyes look a little bit off, though...have you ever tried sketching in those generic facial guidelines while you plot out features? They were invaluable to me when I started drawing people.

Your Merlin makes me smile...he looks just the right combination of Disney and anime...and his facial hair looks so fluffy. XD

Posted: Tuesday, 02 December, 2008 @ 11:37 PM

nodnod. The lower wings really came out amazing. X3 I love them here.

The eye placement really does look awful! XD; I never have tried those generic facial guidelines, if you mean the thing with drawing a circle/oval, making lines to indicate where eyes and whatnot should go, etc.... Well, I tried once or twice, but for me it made it harder because I wasn't used to it at all and I'd already been drawing for a long time without doing it. I might have to try it again, though.

Merlin was a lot of fun to draw. X3

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