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Nihilina Gloomee

Lucyanna Kimsel Vs The Fallen Angel Flock

Lucyanna is sleeping in her electronic bed in Randel Fingerstein's laboratory where he makes robots and other inventions in his spare time while looking for bad guys for Lucyanna to send to jail. It's currently dark in the laboratory with the quiet sounds of typing and mumbling from Randel waking up Lucyanna after her neural upgrades were finished. 4 hours later, Lucyanna is slowly waking up and removed the cords from the ends of her thin hair strands from her cubic electronic bed, she did some 2-minute stretches and glanced at her creator.

"Good evening Lucy, how did you sleep?"

"I slept alright, I keep having visions of this girl in a dark grey rundown boarded up house, the sky was grey like a dead fuzzy monster, and there were other homes that were in different shades of grey as well!"

"Well then, that's definitely an odd dream to have, where was this house by the way Lucy?"

"Blandville, this village looks kind of gloomy if you want my opinion."

"Hmm, you should try to find this village using your Neural GPS" "I haven't tried that feature befo-wait, how many features did you give me after that upgrade, Randel?"

"12, I gave you 12 after the level 3 update"

"Ok, hopefully you don't add anymore"

After a minute of awkward silence, Lucyanna turned on her neural GPS and instantly finds Blandville in the middle of Tarreon grounds, 500 miles next to BootString.

The village looks like what Lucy had described in her dream, greyscale and very gloomy. She observed what the citizens are wearing, mostly greyscale clothes and constant worry and fear on most of their faces, she made a concerned and empathic expression on her face and turned her head towards Randel.

"I might as well help this village; something must be keeping them from being happy"

“Good luck Lucy, be careful out there!”

Then Lucyanna dashed into her closet with her rocket boots and zoomed out of there with an all-white outfit that's mostly just a dress shirt and pants with black shoes with metal soles. She's ready to help Blandville with whoever is making the citizens very fearful.

After 5 hours of flying in the blue skies and now the grey skies of Blandville.

Somber music plays softly in the background, the people in this village looked fearful and unhappy but are still doing their usual routines, Lucyanna descends to the village grounds and asked if she needed to help this village from a villain.

In BlandVille

"W-Who are you, and why are you here, outsider?

"I'm Lucyanna Kimsel, and I'm here to save your village great citizens!" "..." "Umm, heheheh, you guys don't have to look at me like that."

"We don't like it when outsiders come to our village and try to tell us to paint our town in bright, awful colors! We don't need you, outsider, get lost! Even if outsiders are wearing monochrome clothes, we still won’t trust you one bit!"

"C'mon, there's got to be some way for me to help you g-"

"We don't need your help, Lucy!"

Lucyanna turned to the person who yelled at her in complete shock, Lucyanna identified this individual as "Doomy-Chan" or Doom Dvata.

Lucyanna slowly walked towards Doomy and stopped at the sight of her holding an old shotgun.

“Wait, how did you know my name, Doomy?”

“And how did you know my name, Lucy?”

“I mainly knew about you because I was notified that you would come here, I could blow off your head right now if I wanted to…”

“Doomy, don’t be irrational here, I was only visiting here to see if there’s any villains lurking around making you and your neighbors miserable and fearful, that’s all.”

“If you think you’re some superhero trying to save the day, I personally think you aren’t, Lucy. Again, how did you know about me?”

“I once saw you in a dream I once had, and I identified you in a few seconds with my neural GPS and identifier.”

A sudden blast of Doomy's shotgun blew off part of the concrete in the middle of the village where Lucy was standing, and made some villagers flee into their homes, Lucy stumbles about and fell to the ground on her butt looking very startled and looked at Doomy in disgust, Doomy gave Lucy a death stare.

Lucy blasts off to the skies to see the village in a bird’s eye and view and take in on what just happened.

After a minute or so, Lucyanna hears screeches that would harm the ears of any being that flies, Lucy starts to malfunction from the abruptly loud frequencies she’s hearing and she falls to the ground and makes a crater in village grounds as her visions becomes black and white, the only other color she can see is red by her looking at her hand.

Doomy walks toward Lucyanna who is now functioning again but injured got up and hovered to the surface out of the crater,

“How was the angel’s song, isn’t it beautiful?”

“Ugh, I can’t really say, I could hardly hear that song before I bugged out like that.”

“Good luck on fighting that angel flock by the way, Lucy.”

Doomy nods to Lucy and Lucy blast off to the angel flock flying in a circle, Lucy charges her palm laser and zaps at one of the fallen angels, after one got killed, the rest of them quickly surrounded her and threw magic spears at her after they plucked their angel wing feathers in unison.

Lucy flies downward and quickly to different buildings in different directions to stop the spears from getting to her, after Lucy avoided the spears and looked around, she saw the dead fallen angel bleeding out with broken wings, another fallen angel descends near Lucy, she then looks up at the tall fallen angel looking down at the injured robot lady in monochrome with emotionless black eyes.

“Stop scaring this village! Y-you scumbag!”

“My flock are scaring this village because we can, we want this village to hear our song in the grey skies until they accept it.”

“I’m sorry to say it, but I can’t even listen to the song you screeched out in the skies, with the other fallen angels dressed in black robes, who even are you?”

“Skylark, Skylark Nonnel, I once gave this planet all its colors from working with my rainbow angel team 10 years ago, and now I’m with another team and-”

“Can I just defeat you already, this is getting boring, I’m Lucy by the way.”

“I’m up for another fight with you, Lucy.”

Lucy and Skylark both dashed upward into the grey skies of Blandville, Skylark plucked one of his black feathers and it transformed into a big silver sythe waiting for his

opponent quietly with big beating wings.

Lucy transforms her arm into an alien lazar gun, Skylark dashed at Lucy and slashed at one of her arms and she dodged his attack and kicked him in the face really hard.

Skylark yelled in pain and plucked 6 feathers that instantly crystalised and threw them at Lucy who blocked his attack but ended up getting some deep scratches and suddenly zapped Skylark’s hand holding his scythe making him drop it.

Skylark screeched loudly into the grey skies, a flock of angels few at Lucy with sythes and they also wear the same black robes Skylark is wearing, they scratched at Lucy and she zapped at the fallen angels and they start falling from the sky with soft screeching noises.

Skylark looks at Lucyanna with anger and defeat, and flew downward into the center of the village, Lucy also flew downward looking unhappy and instantly started smiling at the villagers cheering and clapping at the rugged and damaged robot lady.

“Thank you so much for getting that flock of fallen angels out of our village!”

“You’re welcome good sir, I’ll always save this planet from evil!” She said happily.

Lucy looked over her shoulder to see the injured fallen angels and seeing Skylark holding the dead fallen angel looking at her with grudgeful anger added with a grimace showing his four fangs. Lucy looked back at the villagers clapping and cheering, in the crowd of many villagers, Doomy looks at Lucy with a soft smile and joyful bright blue eyes behind a pessimistic face. Lucy smiled back Doomy.

Lucyanna waved goodbye at the villagers and launched herself home.

“Hopefully Randel will fix my vision back to normal, I’m tired of seeing three colors” Lucy thought to herself while the skies went from grey to bright blue in an hour to Randel’s underground laboratory.

-THE END-

Lucyanna Kimsel Vs The Fallen Angels by @N0-11 (Nihilina Gloomee)

A short story about Lucyanna fighting with Skylark's minions in Blandville. Please enjoy. (I originally posted this to my DA on December 19th, 2020)

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Posted: Wednesday, 22 May, 2024 @ 08:42 PM

Then Lucyanna dashed into her closet with her rocket boots

I read this as literally flying into the closet. XD

“My flock are scaring this village because we can, we want this village to hear our song in the grey skies until they accept it.”

Ah, the K-Pop stratagem. HAV - Fat Pony

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