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Kelly Pennington

Kohrdam
Kohrdam by @TapeWyrm (Kelly Pennington)

It's finally completed! Well...Sorta. Here's Michael Watkins' dark, anthropomorphic spinosaurus Khordam! I'll add a background later, but I liked it so much I just decided to post it up now.

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21y100d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 14 August, 2003 @ 02:17 AM

This is solid stuff. I like the muscling. Good tone, nice color and detail. It'd be nice if we could see some feet and a tail! I think the eyes need some gloss, regaurdless of whether you'll put pupils in or not. Also, if you're not going to do the background for a while I'd suggest making it black. Well rounded drawing. Eight point five outta ten. (8.5/10)

Posted: Thursday, 14 August, 2003 @ 02:51 AM

Yay! Someone finally gave me a comment. Thank you! Well, I would like to draw him with some legs and a tail but I'm not that great with anthros. And I've decided not to put in a background at all (to prevent screwing it up). But good advice about glossing up the eyes!

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