@dlmx13
Elaine Will

Xs For Is
Xs For Is by @dlmx13 (Elaine Will)

Treiops Treyfid, former frontman of Pitchblende, who now does abstract paintings, designs websites, and plays music on the side. Thing on the poster in the background was taken from the cover of Pitchblende's "Au Jus".

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Teen (V)
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Finished Work
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23y140d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 05 July, 2001 @ 11:58 AM

The first thing I could say was just "Wow". This is really good. I can't find anything to critique because it's all so good. The wood grain is amazing; the lighting is amazing; the folds in the fabrics and their shadows are amazing. I even love the little touch of the dirty sock hanging over the box. I have seen this room before. ^_^

Great job!

Posted: Saturday, 07 July, 2001 @ 11:11 AM

WOW.! Your colored pencilling! (bows) I forget whether you said how big this was, but I'm still impressed anyway. I like the stylizing you did on his face, it makes him an interesting character. I think the perspective on teh stereocase behind him could be a little stronger (if you look at the thumbnail, you see it angles differently than he does)...but Furrball's right, it's the little touches here that REALLY make this pic. (applauds)

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