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DYOS 10.5: Plans Within Plans

The Enclave Rises
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The Enclave Rises by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My eighth submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]

As with an earlier comic, this was based on a script provided by @GenMarshall, although I didn't find it as dissonant.

Captain2 & CivGeneral © themselves;
Thorvald of Lym, Rudolph Krieger & Tsuyoshi Sadao © me;
All commercial property © its respective holders.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]

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