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Especially if the gossips got wind of some of those story elements.
Dusky's the raccoon monk (in this world, clerics are members of the clergy, and are not necessarily white mages). He's out to rescue a nun who is also his daughter via an accidental adulterous affair (after he entered the clergy too, tsk, tsk :p).
Like Deidrei, Dusky was inspired by an example character in the Ironclaw RPG sourcebook.
I did some research on albinos, which helped me to flesh out Wally, the albino squirrel. I found out that albinos generally have poor eyesight, increased sensitivity to sunlight (says Wally, "I don't like the sun 'cause it hurts."), and have been persecuted because they were believed to be "cursed". Despite his childlike mannerisms, he's Deidrei's age.
I certainly am. Some things you probably don't want to hear about coupled with a good night's sleep improved me tremendously, though I've felt the occasional aftereffects for the past two days.
Good work, anyway.
I know how that goes. I probably won't get back to my story until the new year.