green eyes by @AfterDarkAngel (Dark Angel)
Been a work in progress since about September 2005. I have a thing for green eyes and dark hair. I like it, could do with some fixing up. I probably should just do it and get it finished.
This is a crop of the original.
The eyes are too bright.
It really is a matter of what effect you're going for, but I love the look of the eyes and how bright they are. Personally, I wouldn't change them. They contrast really nicely with everything else.
I really like the way you've shaded this. It could use a bit more contrast, but I don't think I'd change it very much; I really like it the way it is right now.