I must agree. This would look great as a finished drawing. The shading would really help convey some form and depth to her. I really love all the detail in her design though. By the way you're right about the swords. They do look cool.
FemaleWarrior by @nightwalker (Matt Partin)
A sketch that I just recently finished. My sketch evolved from a thought I had of a girl holding a cool looking sword. This is also the first handrawn image iv put up in a long time.
the sketch and the idea is every nice. you should consider turning this into a complete piece.