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Paula Miller

PJM Pomegranate 8
PJM Pomegranate 8 by @PoJoMo (Paula Miller)

It looks sort of off, especially by his nose, but I really don't care anymore.

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Posted: Tuesday, 03 May, 2005 @ 08:13 PM

Ooo I like this picture! Love the red and I like the eyes! XD

In terms of "off" though I guess you'd be looking at his right eye.

Although I'm not very good at it myself: the proportion of his right eyes seems to be a bit off, i guess it's a bit too big and his right eye is looking a bit too to the left =D and it's a bit too close to the nose? This might have happened because his other parts of the face sorta show that his faced isn't at such an extreme angle?

I hope you get what I mean lol, it seems like I'm not making sense. But hope it helps anyway =D

I love the texture you put on the clothes and like i said before.. i actually really like the eyes!!!

Nice picture! =D

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