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Thomas Lavelle

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Pencil study for painting, on 8x10 illustration board.. going into photoshop with this..modeled by artist Janna Prosvirina from her "appleday" photo..

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Posted: Saturday, 26 April, 2008 @ 08:59 AM
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Very lovely. The shading is wonderful and I love the atmosphere of this image. You must have spent a long time on it, what with the texture of the trees and all the leaves on the ground. I like the idea and the composition is very eye-catching. A little more detail in the unicorn's neck might not be remiss, and and you might want to make the goblet on the ground look a little straighter in the final painting, but this is still a beautiful piece of art. I look forward to seeing the painting.

Posted: Saturday, 26 April, 2008 @ 10:56 AM
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Thanks Jinx! I did spend more time than I planned with this..kinda was losing patience towards the end thinking that I have to do it all over in photoshop when I paint it..I see the areas you mentioned and will keep them in mind when I paint this..thanks for viewing and feedback..

Posted: Saturday, 26 April, 2008 @ 11:54 AM
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Just rescanned this , details should view better..T.L.

Posted: Sunday, 27 April, 2008 @ 04:00 AM
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This is gorgeous! I love the smoothness of your pencils, especially on the girl. The amount of details in this are wonderful. Jinx already pointed out where things could be improved, so I won't go into that. Great job all around!

Posted: Sunday, 27 April, 2008 @ 06:48 AM
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Thanks Janna Glad you like this, appreciate the feedback , I'm looking forward to coloring this..

Posted: Sunday, 27 April, 2008 @ 11:29 PM
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Did some touch ups to this..

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