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James and Sirius
James and Sirius by @Egg (Egg Kaufman)

Working on this picture... dunno when I'll finish it.... I'll probably finish tomorrow... they're lying down on the grass ^_^; aandd hmm.. yeah that's about it.. I'll probably put them in the shade of a tree.

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Fan Art - Book
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Posted: Sunday, 06 June, 2004 @ 09:05 AM
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Wow, you are obviously very talented. Even just as outlines it looks ten times better than my finished manga. Good job. I can't wait to see it coloured. The only thing that looks a little odd are the splits in their shirt cuff, they look too flat. Once again, congratulations on a great piece.

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