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Valerie Sloan

Sultan Run - Awoken Storm - Finished
Sultan Run - Awoken Storm - Finished by @sultansgirl (Valerie Sloan)

Here is the finished version, of Sultan Run. I am incredibly proud of this picture, it took me ages! There are a hundred flaws with the shading and anatomy - but I did the best I could. So here he is, running through a mist of uh star dust? lmao Thanks to wasabi and CyberCorn Entrophic for their help!

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Posted: Sunday, 27 June, 2004 @ 05:01 AM

I realize how hard it is to do the shading and anatomy. Congradulations. It might be nice to give the face a bit more definition. That is in my opinion one thing you could improve. Nicely done on the legs and midsection. I REALLY like it.

Posted: Monday, 28 June, 2004 @ 06:07 PM

-grins- Thank you. I still could change a few things about the anatomy and million on the shading. I never considered doing anything else to the face, yet now that I think about it, it really would help!

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