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girl by @porifra (pori fra)

might be resemblence to Tomoyo in Tsubasa. just a elaborate doodle.

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19y238d ago
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Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 12:53 AM

This doodle actually has a lot of potential as a finished product, especially since you've put it so much detail into it. Definately try and complete this one, cuz it could look really good.

Just a note to improve it a little: her shoulders should be slightly narrowed. Her neck is very slender, making her build seem more slight, so narrower shoulders would make her look more proportionate. As a general rule, shoulders should be 1 head width on each side.

Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 01:30 AM

actually, her shoulders are supposed to be like that. the clothing she is wearing consists of many layers, adding on to the size of her shoulders. Thanks for the note though^^

Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 01:37 AM

Oooo very very nice~

It'd be best if u could outline it! XD and colours too!

I love the way u draw the asian clothes!!!! they're hard to draw! especially with the flowers and patterns! and layers! hehehe

I love her headset!

Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 09:37 PM

I hope you do finish this. It is such a beautiful image, and the color could only complement it more. The detail is great too.

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