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Some coloring practice on the artgrounds' sketcher program. I couldn't get a bg to work, so I left it simple. Her anatomy on both the humanoid and animal parts is just wonky, so off to do some life drawing practice I go!

[as always, critiques are more than welcome]

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Posted: Friday, 28 April, 2006 @ 09:11 PM
The coloring here is really nice and subtle : ). I think it's interesting that it hinges more on the slight contrast between the orange and blue tinted grays. It puts a lot of emphasis on the inking which I like too for its sketchy/expressivness.

I think that the anatomy mistakes themselves seem more like stylistic choices than ERRORS and don't stick out to me as being bothersom. One thing I would say is that if the torso of the human part was a little longer and curved back more it might emphasize the movement and emotion more. As is its a little stiff and interrupts the flow a little.

Nice work :)

Posted: Sunday, 30 April, 2006 @ 06:38 PM

It looks very nice. I like the perspective on the arm/hand.

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