First of all, kudos to you from trying such a dynamic pose. You're actually quite close. The chest should probably come in front of at least one fore leg, if not both, and some of the hind legs should be visable...
Sorta like this...
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First of all, kudos to you from trying such a dynamic pose. You're actually quite close. The chest should probably come in front of at least one fore leg, if not both, and some of the hind legs should be visable... Sorta like this...
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/a.wielochowski/altai/horse.jpg http://www.eryptick.net/g/horse-000621.jpg
Some goats as well, because the pose is closer...
http://www.dto.com/images/managed/1163.jpg http://www.nps.gov/noca/rescat/mtngoat.jpg http://www.yachtalaska.com/photos/wildlife/goat.jpg http://www.moosecreeklighting.com/mtgoat.jpg
Hope that helps.