Floating temple sketch
Floating temple sketch by @Trezce (Lev)

Exploring the concept of a floating temple that belongs to the main antagonist and it will be the main scenery of the second part of my webcomic. Not fully convinced yet, but I'm heading there. 

Originally it was meant to be an island, but it didn't make much sense in the story, so a temple seemed more appropriate lore wise. 

The main challenge is to make the temple look huge, but my sketches always look so small. Any advice would be welcome. 

The temple is meant to have a beautiful garden that at day is always sunny and at night has beautiful starry nights despite being inside an artificial setting. The inside of this place is a huge, labyrinth-like dominion. Inside, inhabit several followers and servants of the owner of this place along with the owner themselves and their children. 

I'll keep working on it, so this is not a definitive design, but this is pretty much the idea 🤔

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Posted: Thursday, 14 November, 2024 @ 08:17 PM

Interesting. It has a bit of a Greek temple on Olympus/Dragonball King Kai's Palace fusion aesthetic. It seems like you have the building going into the ceiling. I would suggest, along with shrinking the features, maybe have a bit of a gap show between the building's roof and the upper dome.


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