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Bow Initial Sketch 2
Bow Initial Sketch 2 by @Akumyo (Akumyo)

And the progress goes on... Please beat this picture into a pulp I beg of you. Don't touch the BG though, it's still a work in progress. I have a more complete version at home, and it will look 'hella cool' I assure you all.

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Posted: Sunday, 29 February, 2004 @ 07:44 AM

There are only three things I would work on...

although I'm sure no one else will comment on this, his eyes seem a little off. The left eye is closer to the nose than the other - it's a little bit smaller than the right one too.

The next thing I notice is that the lower part of his right arm (I forget what it's called...x.X) Is a bit too long...it's probably just that his anatomy is different than mine^^

The last thing is about his upper right leg. It seems to thick for his body. Just cut it down a smidge, and it'll be fine. Smidge. That word sounds so funny...^^

Once again, I'm sure it all looks fine, and I'm the only one who thinks those things look off...oh well...

Over all, it's a wonderful pic!! Can't wait to see the finished version!

Posted: Sunday, 29 February, 2004 @ 10:31 PM

Awesome. I think you did an excellent job of taking all the critiques I offered. I'm very impressed. Though, the arm holding the hat still seems long to me, I think that's just a character quirk, but something about the muscle structure of the forearm seems a little strange. I'm not an expert on anatomy, so I'm afraid I can tell you nothing on that.

But I can tell you one thing for certain. This character kicks major butt. I LOVE HIM!!! He's got such an awesome design. It's really unreal! I'm definetly looking forward to where you go with this. Good luck!

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