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Erin Ruiz

...feel my soul...
...feel my soul... by @yami0204 (Erin Ruiz)

My Dungeons & Dragons Nezumi (ratfolk) character. His name is Meishu and he's a rogue/soulknife. Those green things in his hand are his soulknife weapons. He is a very sweet rat deserving of much love. pets his nose and gives him cookies

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Posted: Thursday, 24 March, 2005 @ 08:39 AM

Holy crap, I thought I was alone! So, I'm not the only one to draw a Nezumi RP character . . . if you're interested in using him in some formal forum-based RPing with stats & everything, you should check out http://s4.invisionfree.com/eternalrain ; my character there is a monk, and I'm a mod that goes by LancerZero. We're still pretty new, so there's not a lot of members - you and anyone you know is more than welcome to join!

Okay, shameless plug=done. Now for the reason I'm here . . . the pose is a good, dynamic one; he looks ready to whoop on someone. His ears look a bit assymmetric (like I can complain; I forgot to put ANY ears on mine ;)). His hair is well-placed on his head, and the direction of his ponytail's movement matches his pose. His left leg appears to be slightly larger than his right (his left, not the viewers), but you did a pretty good job on those feet. His tail is definitely far longer than that of any other Nezumi I've ever seen, but it works well with the pose. The shading is all good; I can see no real problem with any part of it. All in all, a good job. :)

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