@acra: I think your way to harsh on yourself I listen to the track and it floored me to be honest.  Other then the bass leading to some major speaker bleeding, the track was catchy and agressive as all get out.  Mind your volume levels on your low bass and tone down on the bass level and this track will be even more fantastic when its done.  Don't give in to easily if you do then you wil never accomplish anything great, keep shooting for the outfield and you will start hitting some home runs one by one given enough time and patience.