XD Yes, when I tried serious/expressionless, it did indeed come across as bored! And I think my original motive was something twisted, but when I started drawing, I decided that I'd rather go for passion.
I tried several times drawing pieces of that arm, and every time I did, it didn't look right. XD; Hence why I hid it, which probably also does not look right!
I would enjoy seeing the effect of watercolors! ^^ Whenever you've got some free time, that would be great! Would I need to provide you with pictures of them so you could get the colors right? Sherry is wearing white, BTW.
giggles Daisy-Faye's drawing romantic pictures now...never thought I'd see the day. X3
I like the pose on this one. It reminds me vaguely of the cover of a romance novel, you know, one of those ones full of passion, despair, adventure, and tanned, muscular arms. All it's lacking is the gratuitous flowers and a title in some splashy curving script. XD But it's a good pose for the mood of the picture.
You made the right choice with Gin's expression, I think...for as little as I know about him, twisted delight would create an entirely different (and sort of scary) mood, a soft look might look sort of out-of-character, and serious or expressionless might come across as...well, bored. I like Sherry's expression, too.
The arm....yeeeeeeeeah, I was sort of wondering where it went. XD;; I think part of it should be visible at that angle, but I'd need to be looking in a mirror (and preferably with a handsome, muscular man wrapped around me...hey, even without the reference-motive it'd be fun!) to see which part. Her visible arm, though, looks great. And the hair looks very nice, especially the Gin-bit draped over Sherry.
As for coloring...if you wanted, I could try watercoloring it for you. o.o I don't CG very well, and watercolors might be fitting for the mood of the picture...or I've been looking at too many Watase Yuu artbook scans. XD But if you were interested, I'd be up to the task.