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Aurora Collins

Mermaid WIP
Mermaid WIP by @Ruu-chan (Aurora Collins)

Right now I am doing the lineart and that alone will take awhile. I am still trying to figure out the colors and stuff an I think there maybe something missing. But any suggestions or tips would be great! ^^

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Posted: Tuesday, 07 April, 2009 @ 08:49 AM

Lovely flowing lines, the curves of the hair and her body are very fun to explore. I like the details, such as in the little headdress. Is this the entire page? It seems a shame to have to cut off the tail if you ran out of room. Great shape to her and I love the transparent fins below her navel. The only real recommendation I have is to put some of that kind of detail into a background, even if it's just some coral or rock formations around the corners. Very nice drawing.

Posted: Tuesday, 07 April, 2009 @ 04:31 PM

[quote="Jinx"]Lovely flowing lines, the curves of the hair and her body are very fun to explore. I like the details, such as in the little headdress. Is this the entire page? It seems a shame to have to cut off the tail if you ran out of room. Great shape to her and I love the transparent fins below her navel. The only real recommendation I have is to put some of that kind of detail into a background, even if it's just some coral or rock formations around the corners. Very nice drawing.[/quote]

Yeah I ran out of paper for her tail... I was very disappointed because I wanted to fit her whole body on the page. But I still think it will look good just the same. Also thank you for the suggestions and the compliments.

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