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Revamp
Revamp by @Digi (Digi Otes)

Just because I needed a design sheet for him. I like a set design for stripes, call me odd.

Sort've a revamp of my warlock character, Doujin. The pattern on his chest is...new, and spur-of-the-picture, but I like it all the same. He also got a buzz-cut-ish-thing. griiiin Hoo-hah.

Lesse, lesse...uh...he's got a mini-orb in his right hand(for those who thought it was a sribble ^^), and, well, my only complaint is that his legs seem a little...short. I don't know, it could just be the shorts/boxers I put on him, but...eh...'m picky.

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Posted: Saturday, 05 June, 2004 @ 09:10 PM

As a whole, the body length is fine. The problem is that the torso is too long compared to the legs. Nicely drawn otherwise, though. I like the pattern on his chest.

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