Well, first off, you gotta finish the hands and sandals. They seem to have really nice outlines so far, so I don't think it'll be too hard for you.

Her bangs seem awfully high--which could mean that she has really full bangs, or a huge forehead. So you might want to cut down on them a bit. Her outfit design is also sort of strange--it's like a kimono, but with the bow in front? So it's a little confusing, but creative, nonetheless. So it's really kind of hard to tell what's going on there.

The pose is very nice, though. It shows off her outfit quite nicely, and you did a good job on the shading and lineart. I would really like to see a completed (and possibly colored version) of this image. So, good luck!

Ooo! I really like the outfit you did on the character, it looks really good. Keep up the great work! ^_~