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This Heart I Bear
This Heart I Bear by @nikks (Nikki S.)

This heart I bear I give to you, to do with as you please. You'll hopefully be kind and kill my terrible disease. The world is such a vicious place that hearts are far and few. It's why I trust you just enough to give my heart to you. It broke a couple times before, I'm very sad to say. Though, I suppose it's natural, hearts shatter every day. A heart's a very gentle thing, it houses love unknown. But love's a very special thing and can't be gained alone. A broken heart needs time and care, a patient guiding soul. If only everyone could love, all hearts could then be whole.

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18y154d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 21 June, 2006 @ 02:26 AM

This picture is absolutely ADORABLE! ^^ It reminds me of those little pictures that Jeff Thomas used to do.. very cute! I also love your poem! It was beautiful.. Great work! ^^

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