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Ameigh Haley

Back cover picture
Back cover picture by @aymei (Ameigh Haley)

I know there are so many things wrong with this picture but forgive me...I was terribly unwell when I was drawing it hence my total lack of perception and totally ruining the whole thing. This is just the image I used for the back of my Dbz fan manga and I used Juuhachi (who i tried to give a pouting come hence hither look and totally ruined) and Chichi. However what i did get right is what I love about the picture and lord knows I tried to make them look younger. The pigtails thing wasn't this attempt that was just done for fun. I felt what the heck, give em pigtails it'd be sweet.

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Ameigh Haley

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Posted: Saturday, 23 November, 2002 @ 10:51 AM

This is a good pic, so stop self-depriciating! Even if you feel you haven't gotten proportions right, you have the attitude down perfectly, you have a great idea for the positions and the faces are done very well. So you have a ton of things going for you in this pic and I really don't notice anything that's NOT good about it!

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