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V. E. Lehkonen

Childhood: Trinity and Kim
Childhood: Trinity and Kim by @veltzeh (V. E. Lehkonen)

From my story called "Childhood". There is nothing up of it unlike my other stories, and basically this is the only picture I've made of it. The characters are called Trinity and Kim, and they're mutant soldiers in a post-apocalyptic (I guess) world. They're both females, Kim is 16 and Trinity 19 years old. The third mutant on the team, Tyler (18), is away at the moment. They're all agile telepaths. In addition, Kim has a healing power, Trinity is a telekinetic and Tyler also has some healing abilities and he's supernaturally strong.

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Posted: Monday, 03 November, 2003 @ 11:06 AM

Mää oon edelleenki sitä mieltä, että se on Trinity, joka tossa enemmän kärsii. Haavoja ja sijoiltaan menny olkapää. O_O; Miks niillä on noita tatuointeja? Ja eikö sustaki näytä siltä, että Kimin naama, pää ja tukka ei oikein sovi yhteen tässä kuvassa?

Posted: Wednesday, 10 December, 2003 @ 01:18 PM

No ensinnäkään se olkapää ei ole sijoiltaan, se on vaan sun kummallinen päähänpinttymäs. Kimiä on tapettu paljon enemmän, mutta se kun niinkun paranee aina nopeesti, toisin kun Trinity. Eikä musta tietenkään näytä, että Kimin pää olis jotenkin hassu. Mähän sen piirsin. Hullu.

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