beats Side7 down with an ugly stick and finally gets the flippin' page to come up
LOL. Yes, most definitely a new record. Siegfried interests me, though not so much in an h/c nor fangirlish way in the least. Though angst is a strong possibility. And of course, he's a business man. Mwauh. >D
I like how the hairlines up on their heads turned out, as well as the bangs. Though for Siegfried, if you're gonna do the more realistic hair style, you should probably straight out his side bangs a bit more, or rather, make them a little less obvious. Otherwise, it makes things look just a tad awkward. And Leonhard's ponytail should probably be . . . hmmm . . . a little less full or looking like it's pulled tighter where the band is. It looks like it'd fall out the way it is. His sidebangs turned out really good though. ^^
I think Siegfried's body turned out pretty well, even the foot! still can't draw feet that well Though his left arm, the one around Leonhard, bugs me . . . I think it may be longer than his other one. And I finally figured it out. The elbow is suppose to be at about the waist and whatnot. which was the only thing she got out of the long line of criticisms from the high school art teacher ((She immediately says something negative as soon as she sees someone's work)). It also doesn't look like it's really too much against Leonhard . . . shrug Though I'd say his nose is pretty durn next to perfect.
Those were supposed to be gunshot wounds you say? Hmmm . . . The one down below his right arm certainly looks more like a knife wound to me. XD;; Perhaps in the future would should start trying to draw the wound/source of blood itself. nodnod I've started to try to do that and it does look more authentic. Though I find it easier when the person has clothes on because it's easier to hide. LOL
I'm certainly going to have to get to this fic soon. >3 ... Though as I've said, people keep interrupting my schedule. ~.~;;
KCGP art! I'm surprised to find some so soon, 'specially since the dubbed version has only started airing.
The shading and detail on the hair seems rather nice, and I assume the lack of shading elsewhere is because you plan to color it in later. As it is, the hair looks pretty good.
Siegfried's proportions seem to be very nice (his right arm - the one holding Leon's - is an especially nice hand), and his torso also looks very nice (I find it terribly difficult to draw bare-chested males). His other arm might be a bit too long though - not much, but it seems just a bit offbalance.
Seigfried does seem rather... content over the fact that he's bleeding. Almost like it's an everyday occurance. ^_^ Just part of a day's work, and all.
And that's an awesome floor, there. It really helps offset the rest of it, providing them an actual place to rest.
^_^ I hope the colored version comes out well.