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Heather Gladden

Sun and Moon
Sun and Moon by @UndyingSong (Heather Gladden)

He goes to retrieve the Moon, from the clouds she was formed.

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Mature (NS)
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Finished Work
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19y6d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 15 November, 2005 @ 08:05 AM

Holyjesus why doesn't this have any comments.

Heather, you amaze me with your talent. The contrast of the orange dragon aginst that black/green is just TOO visually enticing. It makes my eye just jump all over the piece, trying to take it all in at once. I don't think I like the way their feet are just.. sort of lost in the clouds, though, and I think the image would be more powerful if you had continued to define them a little more. I love the way the orange dragon is tenderly touching the white one's face, as well. It's so sweet...

Posted: Tuesday, 15 November, 2005 @ 09:27 AM

Ike continues to insist that I should have made the dragon green! But, I just love the blue/orange combination far too much. :)

It took me a while to decide what I wanted to do with the legs (they were already very erroneous to begin with - very old sketch!), and eventually it occured to me that making the ends part of the already-existing clouds that I had going in the top right corner at the time. But, a few people don't seem to like it much - maybe it is too distracting? Thank you for the helpful suggestions, hon! :D They are kept in mind for future pictures. :}

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