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a girl
a girl by @porifra (pori fra)

this was done few days ago. like I said, a girl. no, she's not Chi, though I must admit that she does have resemblence to Chi. I realized that when I finished the drawing. oh wells. I wanted to practice folds of dress, laces, so and so forth.

just look at the result. her head's a bit to big, her whole body's a bit tilted, and the feet seems a little too short... II don't like the nose either.sigh I'll never get anything right.

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Rough / Concept
Submitted:
20y33d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 20 October, 2004 @ 02:22 AM

I think the head and feet are fine and I love the ruffles on her dress and headband. I'd say they're perfect. I couldn't say anything about them that looks off or needs improvement. You've given them a great shape that really jumps off the page. The folds of her skirt are very nicely drawn as well, very believable. Her left hand is a little long, but other than that, I think this picture is wonderful. I love the style of this drawing, very soft and delicate. Quite beautiful to look at. Nice work.

Posted: Wednesday, 20 October, 2004 @ 08:49 AM

HI NICE WORK.........COLOR WILL BRING IT TO LIFE...SHIRLEY

Posted: Wednesday, 20 October, 2004 @ 12:44 PM

Wow! Beautiful!

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