@Gold_Ear
MaryElizabeth Lauro

Shards
Shards by @Gold_Ear (MaryElizabeth Lauro)

Poem about one of my friends who's having a hard time with life. This one is for sale as a print (i'll fix the one typo in it if you want a print)

Category:
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
19y212d ago
Tags:
None
Other Work By @Gold_Ear

Comments & Critiques (2)

Preferred comment/critique type for this content: Any Kind

Posted: Saturday, 23 April, 2005 @ 02:10 AM

WOW! This is really beautiful! The background is awesome, the horse is stunning, and the poem is very moving. A lovely composition, wonderfully presented! Keep up the wonderful work! :-)

Posted: Saturday, 23 April, 2005 @ 01:30 PM

Wow, thanks, the last person who commented on my work did so about a year ago, thankyou for actually looking ^^

Leave a Comment

You must be logged in and have an Active account to leave a comment.
Please, login or sign up for an account.

What kind of comments is Gold_Ear seeking for this piece?

  • Any Kind - Self-explanatory.
  • Casual Comments - Comments of a more social nature.
  • Light Critique - Comments containing constructive suggestions about this work.
  • Heavy Critique - A serious analysis of this work, with emphasis on identifying potential problem areas, good use of technique and skill, and suggestions for potentially improving the work.
Please keep in mind, critiques may highlight both positive and negative aspects of this work, but the main goal is to constructively help the artist to improve in their skills and execution. Be kind, considerate, and polite.