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Yao Chi Soars
Yao Chi Soars by @lynne (Lynne)

Requested by Yao Chi ^_^ He liked the pic I did a while back of me on the mountain with all the light streamies and said he wanted a similarly spiritually-styled piccy of him... uhm... so I did my best |=|:D I like how this came out.. although I'm sure there's many ways it could be better...

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Posted: Tuesday, 15 June, 2004 @ 08:35 PM

Ooh, he's beautiful...the colors are so vivid, and wow! in your face! ^^ The light effect is very well done, and it all pulls together so well.

Posted: Tuesday, 15 June, 2004 @ 08:46 PM

I do like the coloration, you definitely stuck to the scheme as he has laid out. Plus the happy facial expression is great!

Posted: Tuesday, 15 June, 2004 @ 09:18 PM

chokes on soda HOLY SUGAR! O.O That's so FOOKING COOL! And THE COLORS! ;.;! It makes me feel all holy and neat.... IT ROCKS!

Posted: Tuesday, 15 June, 2004 @ 11:02 PM

Oh wow! This is beautiful! The color use is really nice, as is the shading. The background itself is really nice, and the rays of light are an awesome addition to the piece! But most of all the COLORS! So vivid and moving! The right wing (dragon's left) seems a bit oddly bent off the shoulder, but that's just me being nitpicky, and I'd probably have made the same mistake. Great job!

Posted: Wednesday, 16 June, 2004 @ 11:23 AM

This is really well done, congratulations! The lighting effect really adds to the picture. You should do a life-like image without the black outlines. I bet it would look even nicer, if that's possible! The purple hair could be improved slightly, made to look more busy, but that is the only criticism I can give. You did a wonderful job.

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