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Michelle Desormeau

Aetherian Women
Aetherian Women by @prisoner_of_egypt (Michelle Desormeau)

Here's a colored sketch of what Aetherian women (from the novel I'm working on) are supposed to look like. I forgot to color the necklace, but otherwise I think it turned out quite nice. Colored with prismacolor scholar coloring pencils. Will work on more when I've got time to :3

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Posted: Tuesday, 04 January, 2005 @ 07:13 AM

Really nicely done! true artist are ones that create...well rendered.........

Posted: Monday, 24 January, 2005 @ 12:24 AM

This is beautiful. I am constantly amazed at your sense of anatomy because I struggle with it myself. I strongly suggest that you go back and work on her hands because it's obvious that her left hand is communicating something to the audience. A stronger pose and a cleaner edge around her hands would really solidify this piece. Hands can be difficult but they are also very important, especially to a piece like this.

Posted: Friday, 18 February, 2005 @ 12:00 AM
very nice drawing and from your brain that is kind of hard for me i some times just lay down an try to think of a cartoon or a face but every time it just doesnt work : ( oh well lol i like her dress and the way she is standing um the only thing i think that needs some work or maybe its the size of the picture? but when i look at it the wings dont look like there on her, looks more like the background and one side looks longer then the other

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