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Aoshi and his buddy the sword or katakana
Aoshi and his buddy the sword or katakana by @Lucifel (Sakura H)

Damn, drew it a loooooong time ago. Its smudged. -.-;;;; well there you go Aoshi and his buddy a crooked sword or so I suppose ^^;;

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20y86d ago
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Posted: Friday, 27 August, 2004 @ 10:53 PM

Eee, Aoshi's so cool.^_^ I always really liked him. Great picture. One piece of criticism is that you can't really tell it's him until you are told. Like, it's the same jacket and such, but the shading is really dark and it makes it look like he has black hair and dark clothes rather than the lighter colors Aoshi has.

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