This is such a cute pose and design. I like how it looks like she's stepping out! Her arms seem slightly awkward, though, like they are too far away from her sides and a little large. Her right in particular seems to be coming out of her body at an awkward angle--the line on the bottom should be further down and more to the side, I believe. Her waist might also be a little too compressed. I like the wings--they look so much like leaves! Her hair is awesome--it does look an awful lot like flames! I hope you color this--it would look much better with a splash of firey red to it!
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This is such a cute pose and design. I like how it looks like she's stepping out! Her arms seem slightly awkward, though, like they are too far away from her sides and a little large. Her right in particular seems to be coming out of her body at an awkward angle--the line on the bottom should be further down and more to the side, I believe. Her waist might also be a little too compressed. I like the wings--they look so much like leaves! Her hair is awesome--it does look an awful lot like flames! I hope you color this--it would look much better with a splash of firey red to it!