@marla
marla deepali

un-love
un-love by @marla (marla deepali)

to someone i almost loved. the jerk.

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Posted: Wednesday, 11 February, 2004 @ 12:52 AM

I know the feeling. Believe me. I can totally feel the empty expression on the girl's face.

(btw, rate it T for drugs--smoking counts)

Posted: Wednesday, 11 February, 2004 @ 07:06 PM

oh yeah. thanks. =P

Posted: Wednesday, 11 February, 2004 @ 02:56 AM

Bravo! You have skills as both artist and poet! I love the poem, and the simple line art goes perfectly!

Posted: Friday, 13 February, 2004 @ 03:24 PM

thank you. my simple line art however is done only because i'm terrible and coloring and shading. =) and as for the poem, i'm not that great, just trying to vent is all. a small attempt at spoken word.

Posted: Thursday, 12 February, 2004 @ 07:15 PM

Wow...just when I thought your drawings couldnt possibly get any better (see your Wait For Me drawing), you make something even better. I've never really been hurt by some one like that, and Ive never been "in love" or anywhere close to it (well, I love people, but never like that, you know what Im saying?) but the drawing alone gives me a taste of what it must be like, I really can feel the emotion in this drawing, and I love the simplicity to your line art. I dont read poetry very much, I've read a bit though, and I think that this poem is excellent, and it goes perfectly with the picture. Im not lying, this is defiantly great, and you are truly a better artist than I am (seriously). I really mean it, good job. Now all you need to do is ink it X3

Posted: Friday, 13 February, 2004 @ 06:14 PM

you know, when you're in that mood, something will come out of you, and it will be incredible, because it isn't about the detail or how pretty it comes out, but because you work it in that FEELING that comes right from your soul. although, i hope you create something out of happiness rather than pain. and don't compare your talents to me, because it's not that i'm better, or you're better. our styles are just different. so don't give me that ish.

Posted: Friday, 20 February, 2004 @ 05:59 PM

lol! oh, man. that sounded like cheese and crackers.

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