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Yaminah Tashanazi

Random Smoker
Random Smoker by @chaosmage (Yaminah Tashanazi)

Yes, I like the word "random". I use it often when I've created something and I have no idea what it is yet.

I started this in practice to not drawing my eyes so close together, nor so large. I'm rather pleased with the results. I struggled quite a bit at it.

It was a nice change of pace, considering I haven't drawn any guys for a while. He kinda looks like someone just told him for the ten millionth time that smoking is bad for his health. Kinda also looks like he's turning. I love how limp his hair looks. And I'm thinking of adding a backpack.

I'm gonna start coloring this as soon as I figure out what colors I wanna use.

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Rating:
Teen (O)
Class:
Rough / Concept
Submitted:
19y124d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 21 July, 2005 @ 06:29 AM

XD I love his expression. And the limp hair falling around him looks really cool. With his glasses, though, and the hair, I'm not sure I can tell just how far apart you did put the eyes. ^^; But I know that old habits are often hard to break. It does look like they're a bit farther apart than usual, though. ^^

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