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NegaDYOS: JoanK and the Legend of the First Comic
NegaDYOS: JoanK and the Legend of the First Comic by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)
My 29th submission to DYOS XII: [[link]](https://forums.civfanatics.com/threads/draw-your-own-story-at-plots-end.502368/post-15720477)

I'd started this ages ago but for whatever reason work quickly stalled; I scrambled to finish it as a last-minute April Fool's special, which conveniently dovetailed with the site's prompt this year, hence posting this same-day.

/hashtag SaveHoofs

While Johanna posted the first third here, the second segment was leaked to chat in two versions—when she asked me to NegaDYOS her, I'm not sure she expected that I still had copies. =P

Original comic(s) by JohannaK.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt 1 April 2020.]


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Posted: Wednesday, 24 May, 2023 @ 09:04 PM

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, liminal

Posted: Thursday, 25 May, 2023 @ 06:03 PM

@Warehouse_Rabbit: After joakim, JK was probably the best-suited to hardcore existentialism. There were plans in the mid-2010s to team up with Gruekiller for a joint story (featuring a cameo by Toyoda, no doubt to CG's infuriation), but given this remains literally the only appearance of the comic in-thread... I'm not holding my breath. :x

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