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Runner - Pencil
Runner - Pencil by @BadKarma (Jason Lamey)

Work in progress on my latest drawing. This is the very rough pencil sketch. This one is an exercise in perspective, anatomy, dynamic movement, and (soon) colouring with marker.

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Jason Lamey

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Posted: Monday, 15 April, 2002 @ 06:51 PM

Eeghhh... This one's so hard to "tell" about...Basically, though, the way the upper body is situated, it makes me want to bend his legs back so we see the upper leg bones and such.
OR, if you prefer, the way the lower body goes, makes me want to see just the underside of his chin. That's how violent the changes in perspective are with this pic... We're seeing the legs from one pov, and simultaneously seeing the head from a completely different pov.

Another thing you might wanna get Furrball outfor is to maybe model the head for you -- I see what you're getting at with that angle, but it still doesn't look 3D (that's OK, though, my faces like that still don't look 3D! Tis tricky, good you attempted it!).

Eemmm......Yeh. I think that's all I can say for now.

my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill

Posted: Tuesday, 16 April, 2002 @ 11:54 AM

Hey Athie.

Thanks for the comments. You've touched on some things I had noticed as well.

For what it's worth, the image has evolved somewhat, and I've made changes to the body positioning. I've yet to work on the head, though. It kind of annoys me. But that's one of the later details to work out.

wink It's still a work in progress, and I'll scan and upload an updated pic soon.

Thanks again for your observations! They really help.

Posted: Tuesday, 16 April, 2002 @ 12:00 PM

Oh, forgot to mention... you are supposed to be able to see the underside of his chin. This scan is absolutely horrible. :/

Posted: Friday, 19 April, 2002 @ 05:14 PM

Wow thats some great action can't wait to see the finished version. Leave me a personal message when its done BK

Posted: Thursday, 09 May, 2002 @ 09:44 AM

Yeah scanners stink.....in a way...of corse I have to give them to my dad who scans them THEN sinds them to my computer......with names like:TWINSNOT

Witch was SAPPOSED to mean Twins...NOT! If ya know what I mean......sigh....

Posted: Sunday, 06 October, 2024 @ 02:21 AM

The character looks like they could be a real super jumper/runner due to how high they look above they floor. I like it, looks nice.

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