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Janna Fong

Looking back
Looking back by @jfong (Janna Fong)

While sketching today, I ended up drawing Demos again. I guess I'm in a fanart drawing mood. XP I drew him in more casual looking clothes.

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Posted: Monday, 27 December, 2004 @ 01:42 AM

Oh wow, very cool! I particularly love the way his pants lop about around his shoes. And his butt. Which was odd to type, but it's true. It's a very well-drawn butt.

Great pose and attitude--good work! My only crit, and it's a nitpick, is that his mouth seems to be oddly positioned.

Love it <3

Posted: Sunday, 02 January, 2005 @ 09:30 AM

i completely agree with ^ lol. great position, and clothes as always. the mouth is too far over to the left, and really shouldn't be seen all that much because that is almost a true profile angle for the head. but other than that, this is good.

Sincerely, Ikaika

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