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Janna Fong

Fighter
Fighter by @jfong (Janna Fong)

I finally got around to finishing a sketch. =D I like his costume despite its randomness. At first I had his top a dark greenish blue before changing it to black. It just didn't seem to fit him. XP Ah well. Enjoy!

Drawn in Painter Colored in Photoshop

btw, sorry for the cheap background. XP

Edit: Uploaded a different version due to Li-chan's advice. =)

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Posted: Sunday, 01 May, 2005 @ 02:11 AM

I love the randomness of this outfit! It's unique without being bizarre. There's a lot of that these days, so it's a refreshing change to see something like this. Great shading as always, love the folds on the shirt. A little more definition on his arm muscles wouldn't hurt, but otherwise I love it. Cool stuff.

Posted: Sunday, 01 May, 2005 @ 02:16 PM

Very nice~ I like your solid use of colours! The clothes are very nice too! Very unique indeed!

Very smooth lineart too~ Very nice! =D

Posted: Monday, 02 May, 2005 @ 08:40 PM

This is a cool piece! I agree that his clothes are really nice and unique in design. Nice work!

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Posted: Wednesday, 04 May, 2005 @ 11:09 AM

You have a great design going on--I'm really noticing how you've developed your eye for detail, like in the way the belts overlap and connect into themselves, and the design on his cuff and sleeve. I like his spaced out expression, although I'm not quite sure what it means, and the way you have lighting that makes it look like he's been caught in a searchlight, almost.

The only thing that bothers me, REALLY bothers me, and that's the background. You have the darkest part coming from the same direction the lighting is, and it's messing with my head something awful. It would be PERFECT in the lower left corner instead, and would look more like his shadow or something. :)

Posted: Saturday, 08 March, 2008 @ 05:29 PM

I really like this - He has an awesome outfit. :3 Great job with the lighting/shading, too. You've got mad coloring skills, heh.

Oooh, I like his hair, too. x3

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