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B Sanders

Kid Tankas
Kid Tankas by @fragmented_imagination (B Sanders)

Mei wa iru
Akuyuu mimai
Ganbatte
Itsumo chuusei
Shinyuu ni te o

"I have a niece.
Trying her best
Meeting bad friends
Always loyal
And lends a hand to new friends."

Oi wa iru
Chinmoku dakedo
Atama yoku
Shuuchuu tsuyoku
Mai peisu na ko

"I have a nephew.
Although he is quiet,
He is smart,
Strongly focused,
A kid that lives at his own pace."

Mei wa iru
Kyoufu ga ooku
Nayandemo
Mainichi genki
Kagayaku egao

"I have a niece.
Although she is always concerned
With so many fears
She is energetic every day
And has a shining smile."

Oi wa iru
Doki ga hayai ga
Koukishin
Koe o dasu no ga
Mottomo hayai

"I have a nephew.
He is quick to anger,
But he is curious
And he is even faster
To speak."

Oi wa iru
Donna toki demo
Asobitai
Aniki ni aogu
Kouron shitemo

"I have a nephew.
He wants to play,
No matter the time.
He looks up to his brothers
Even when they argue."

Oi wa iru
Me ga sametanara
Waratteru
Sugosu hibi ni wa
Tanoshii kokoro

"I have a nephew.
He's always smiling
When he's awake.
In these passing days,
A heart of fun."

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136d14h ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 02 July, 2024 @ 02:49 AM
Rating: 5

Cool job.

Posted: Tuesday, 02 July, 2024 @ 02:51 AM

@VerseOfDreams: Thank you!

Posted: Tuesday, 02 July, 2024 @ 03:05 AM

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