@Larz
Larissa P.

Some lady person
Some lady person by @Larz (Larissa P.)

and such an interesting title too! Titles are one of the worst parts. I cant think of catchy ones. But isn't it a kewl pic? Good for me at least but seeing as how I deleted all my others heh you wouldn't know would you? I need to work on my coloring job but owe well...^_^

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Posted: Monday, 27 October, 2003 @ 02:43 PM

Pretty decent! The head is a little too small, so it looks unbalanced. But the torso, especially the hips, are really well done. Keep working on color, the hair seems pretty nice! The best thing to learn about that is to observe, whether it be real life or other pictures, to see how shadows make things more 3D. Keep working on it!

Posted: Friday, 28 November, 2003 @ 02:49 PM

Yeah I noticed the head was a little too small after I had finished coloring it...>< the coloring shall be a constent problem but I will keep working on it. ^^ thatnks for the comment

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