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Dreiz
Dreiz by @Demented_Rabbit (demented rabbit)

A character that'll appear in the Labyrinth fanfiction in the works. Labyrinth © Jim Henson Productions original character © mine

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Posted: Monday, 15 November, 2004 @ 08:14 PM

You can draw guys. o.O I am impressed. His face is very well done, but his one eye looks a little off--the one on our left. It's like it's facing another direction. I'd try moving the iris and pupil in a little closer to his other eye, also, moving the entire thing lower a bit. Try to keep eyes equal when you're drawing this kind of style, in real life, they're not equal at all, but it looks better if you draw them that way. At least that's how it seems to me. :) Keep it up!

Posted: Monday, 15 November, 2004 @ 08:33 PM

THanks. ^^ I rarely draw guys cause I have trouble with them, I've taken life drawing classes but it's different. o0 Thanks for the suggestion; I agree now that I look at it it's a little off. ::lol:: I might get back to it, it's been a while since I've touched it.

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