@Rikkuyuna89
Jessica ???

Manga Girl
Manga Girl by @Rikkuyuna89 (Jessica ???)

After read my "How to draw manga" book, I wanted to practice, and that is there finished result. It happens to be my first CG, so the hair isn't good. I like how I did the shading on her face though. I guess it's a good first try.

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Posted: Friday, 14 November, 2003 @ 08:51 PM

Not bad for a first CG. I would recommend cropping the image though, all the white space is distracting. Keep practicing! HTDM books are awesome references. So keep using it to learn more. I also recommend more contrast on your shading--don't be afraid to use white highlights, that's a very good manga technique! But the colors are very nice. :) Keep it up!

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