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Emily H

Koka
Koka by @emilu (Emily H)

Dear lord this sucks so much. STOP LOOKING AT IT! Um... I joined Melissa's Xmen muck and I drew my character, but it's so ugly I'm gonna hafta change it. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Emily H

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Posted: Saturday, 01 June, 2002 @ 03:28 PM

It's not that bad, I would suggest lowering her cheekbone there(her right your left) a bit. Her hips and legs could use a bit of shape, try and find an anatomy book or some place online where you could find some refrences for drawing people. I love the boots, they just rock!

Posted: Friday, 07 June, 2002 @ 06:08 PM

Yeah, what he/she/it said, and try to make her hands a little less wacky. They look a little loose and large. Pretty! I like it very much!

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