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So what do you want..??
So what do you want..?? by @holymiracle (holy miracle)

huh..Can it be called in doujinshi ^ ^!!

I draw for my fiction... but change the conversation ^ ^ (My native languague is not English, so maybe I do some grammar wrong in this. Do you understand what they said? huh?)

In real fiction this goddess told that they must take some item from elven-black mage for use this item to turn back in past time.

But in this, I change Wassery's word (I copy all of characters' habit from my friends. And this one love The Prince of Tennis so much.)

It's a rouge work that I draw in my freetime (Today's just a bored time) 2hr. ^ ^!! (Because that Archery I must stay 12.00 untill 16.30 to study it -''-)

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Posted: Monday, 01 November, 2004 @ 01:28 PM

This is cute and funny. The english grammar is a little off, I think it should read more like "So, you want this item, huh..." "But!" "I won't give it to you for free. It has to be an exchange!" "What do you mean, an exchange?!" "Wait... Uris..." "O.K. Please tell me what you want for it." "Good! Bring me... a Prince of Tennis doujinshi!" "My love Fujji-sama... I love you, my darling!"

Your eyes, as always, are drawn amazingly well. I really like this so far, I'll look forward to seeing your entire work someday. ::grins::

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 08:53 AM

Hee...so it got too much wrong grammar ^ ^!! thank you very much > <

Thank you again ^ ^!! entry works? huh - -!! (I want to know,too. when it will finish..? someday..good ^ ^)

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