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happy holloween
happy holloween by @porifra (pori fra)

happy halloween pplz!

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Posted: Sunday, 31 October, 2004 @ 02:44 AM

I really like this image, the drawing itself is really well done. ^_^ very impressive.

But the comment I have to make is about your colouring a bit. May I ask what kind of coloured pencils you use? If you're looking to be serious about art and colouring with coloured pencils then invest in some prisma coloured pencils. They have a very soft lead very good for colouring and shading.

Another thing is watch your strokes in the background, if you see you went diagonal, but then when you got near the images you changed direction, see how you can see it? The best bet is either to colour it more solidly or to make sure you don't change direction when near objects. >.<

Thanks for the happy halloween though and I do really like it!

Posted: Tuesday, 02 November, 2004 @ 03:17 PM

I used watercolor pencils my friend sent me, but since the paper was thin I couldn't put water on it... and the changed direction around the image was because I thought the witch needed a little touch to bring it out.

Posted: Sunday, 31 October, 2004 @ 01:39 PM

This image is adorable. The girl is very well drawn, and the kitty is too cute! I really love your coloring, especially the soft shading on her dress and hat. The eyes are my favorite part, however...

I also like how this image doesn't have stiff lineart. It makes it softer and sweeter, somehow. My only complaint is that it's s lightly blurry by the kitty, which makes her a little hard to see. Happy Halloween back to you!

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