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My best attempt yet by @SabakuKyuut777

Okay so this has to be my best attempt yet. I think I will start over in a new file and just copy/paste my patterns because I didn't label anything and its really unorganized, which makes it difficult to finish. I also kinda got lazy the drums here because I was mostly focused on the melody and it only had a kick before I went in to add the other stuff. When I do start the new file to put the melody in, I will try and keep the same instruments but also give it a more thought-out drum pattern and better mixing. Anyway, hope you enjoy this preview! Im actually pretty proud of it, as messy and simple as it is. Also you may notice how some of the drums seem to appear and disappear at random, which is because I was so disorganized, but it will be fixed in the next iteration of this track xD

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Posted: Tuesday, 27 August, 2024 @ 03:42 AM
Rating: 4

This has potential, we all start somewhere and this is a good start, rule of thumb never get lazy with your instruments don't be afriad to experiment a little and see where it takes you. 

Posted: Tuesday, 27 August, 2024 @ 11:49 AM

@XxTheCreativeKitsunexX: Thank you for the feedback! :D Don't worry, next time it will sound much more polished.

Posted: Tuesday, 27 August, 2024 @ 02:25 PM

@marven4lyf: No worries just keep at it and don't give up you will do some amazing things one day when it comes to making music. 

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