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Lindsay Paxton

That thars a kyubi
That thars a kyubi by @Laica (Lindsay Paxton)

Yay! my first pic on side7! well like the title says, its a kyubi.( i think thats what theyre called) i was pretty proud of this one, except for the hill the kyubis standing on....that looks kinda...stinky. any comments or advice will be much appreciated! ( bows)

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Posted: Sunday, 04 June, 2006 @ 07:03 PM

Very nice! I love the sky. All the detail is nicely stylized and flows together well. Although I am not really good at animal anatomy the back legs seems awkward (as I said though I am not good with animals). Some shading under kyubi would help to ground his form. As for the hill how about some texture? All of the grass has its own blade that would create a lot of texture.

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